And they told me that eating sweets from strangers was bad, they certainly did not want me to become son-in-law of the dragon king ☺☺☺💕💘This is my first review and I do not know much in English, any error tells me
From what I have read, it did not look puppy-love werewolf story. It seemed to be an action-packed, revenge story. so far it's been good, and I would recommend raising the word count in the first dozens or so chapters. Other than that you need to tune the dialogues, it looked too dumb out for the readers and there are a few repetitive words. Good Job, jd.
Not sure, how many Chapters, it says I've read, but I read it before it was on Qidan. It was one of my first before I knew of mainstream novels such as Desolate Era, Coiling Dragon, Stellar Transformations and etc. (Note, their author)During the time I read it, it was one of my favorites.(The bar was pretty low back then, as I didn't know the above novels)Story Development, Character Design and World Building are slightly reminiscent of Martial God Asura in repetitiveness.But, as long as they don't keep continuing, like Martial God Asura, and stop somewhere such as #### Stage, instead of finding a higher Realm and continuing the same thing as the beginning. They should be fine
not bad of a story but why do they forget that when they do something in the past it will cause a butterfly effect and I hope that I won't see some stupid character otherwise its not bad at all
The story is very interesting and fun to read it has some flavor of a few other novels that it took inspiration from but it still retains it's own individuality and has a very good chance of being a top novel on the app if the chapters can keep coming
It’s interesting so far. There were a few grammar issues that were noticeable in chapters 3-5 that you could improve. Other than that the story progresses nicely. I’m more of a romance reader but I still enjoyed reading this novel. The chapters are short but feel right to the point. Good job and keep improving and it’ll be even better.
I've read up to 100, and so far I've been enjoying it. This story feels like a slow burn, moving the story forward wise. Maybe too convenient getting super rare demon summon, but I'm okay with that. Dunno if giving him crazy super dungeon to fight so early is the way to go, but we'll see how it progresses.
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