Having read the first two volumes, I can say this is a fairly average novel. The story stands out in how it interweaves the various adventures and lives of the Orphans. There's a hint of a larger conflict looming in the background, but we're still quite far from it.
Each volume so far focuses on telling a distinct story and on the development of the Orphans. The main character (MC) often takes a back seat, serving more as a pivotal point or a showcase. Interestingly, the MC doesn't face the typical challenges or issues found in cultivation or wuxia stories. Instead, the focus is on ensuring the Orphans are on the right path as much as possible.
The biggest issue is that the author struggles to make the most of these moments early on. For instance, Volume 1 had ongoing problems with character growth and direction, feeling like a checklist of points to hit and wrap up neatly with the MC. Volume 2 showed improvement with more backstory and suspense, but it still suffered from a rushed and messy resolution of problems.
I've just started Volume 3, and I hope to see the author continue to improve. There have been noticeable changes between Volumes 1 and 2, and I hope these improvements persist in Volume 3. For now, I'd say this novel is average and has plenty of room for growth. It's not bad, but the areas where it falls short are evident as you read through it.
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Each volume so far focuses on telling a distinct story and on the development of the Orphans. The main character (MC) often takes a back seat, serving more as a pivotal point or a showcase. Interestingly, the MC doesn't face the typical challenges or issues found in cultivation or wuxia stories. Instead, the focus is on ensuring the Orphans are on the right path as much as possible.
The biggest issue is that the author struggles to make the most of these moments early on. For instance, Volume 1 had ongoing problems with character growth and direction, feeling like a checklist of points to hit and wrap up neatly with the MC. Volume 2 showed improvement with more backstory and suspense, but it still suffered from a rushed and messy resolution of problems.
I've just started Volume 3, and I hope to see the author continue to improve. There have been noticeable changes between Volumes 1 and 2, and I hope these improvements persist in Volume 3. For now, I'd say this novel is average and has plenty of room for growth. It's not bad, but the areas where it falls short are evident as you read through it.