Honest reviewI'm at chap 96The Mc is dumb that doesn't think of the long term consequences of his actionsEspecially when he did the raid at the terrorist. He just putting himself in the spot light where any secret organizations or government see him.I'm pretty sure that those guys will come snooping in and boom he's either captured for "examination" or manipulated or deadSeriously just showing off his weapons put him on every organizations, government, etc. watchlist. And being in their watchlist is already fatal for him in either long or short term period.
Initially thought that this would be a promising read, but disappointment comes easily.I think many things could have been handled with greater wisdom and intellect. Lots of misunderstandings brought about by the initial situation he already is in when we start the story - but there seems to be little to no attempt at any communication or reconciliation thus far (trial read). All parties are hot-blooded (but it's military, so ok I guess), but could be more military-esque by going through certain channels and utilizing certain resources. It's a hot mess of a situation and a hot mess of an MC. Violence seems to be the only answer, and it doesn't solve the root of problems.
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this is my personal opinion while reading this book. (sorry for my bad English)the story is pretty straight forward as the main character like any other rpg story but in good way like ainz or rimiru. the world building is amazing as you really get invested towards the mystery of this invention strange "worlds". the gaming system is very solid as the author able to showcase how he rank and rate everything making the world feel more real. the MC is strong but it's more like a head starts because his currently weak compare to other npc, furthermore I like he has a curse to give him some handicap. the pacing is good as it's both fast yet slow enough for you to get invested. the side character are likable though feel kinda force at times. lastly.....WEAR A MASK! MASK FOR YOU, YOU, YOU EVERYONE GETS A MASK!!
For those of us climbing to the top of the food chain, there can be no mercy. There is but one rule: hunt or be hunted...On Earth, one had to be mindful of rumors, it was easy to ruin a person's life with some malicious lies. It's because we are all mortals, the laws of the world are different, and individuals could not surpass the power of society.But not here.
Author, I really like the story so far but its sad to see that this novel does not get the recognition it deserves. Which is why I have a proposition. Why don't you try reuploading the novel? You might get more readers that way and maybe even get a contract earlier.
A very good story, it has a lot of potentials. The author wrote it with a good describing and enthusiasm. The story develops greatly, but it needs an experienced editor to make it reached it full potential.
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