Rain Beef Indigo

Speed: 50

" terimakasih itu sangat membantu".

Bulma:sure

"oi yang kau lakukan itu salah.... kau bisa sakit sakitan nanti" mendengar suara dari belakang isabell membalik badan dan melihat seorang laki laki berambut hitam dengan perban di tangan kanan dan kepalanya seperti mummy, membuat isabell tidak bisa menahan dan tertawa.

(Hinawakan ni maymay ang kaliwang kamay ni xenon)

Good novel, keep writing it's just need single luck to be popular and blow up...............................................................

The premise of the novel is interesting but the protagonist is shit, I went in expecting a hero but he is just a hunter who only contradicts himself, he talks about protecting people, the duty of a hero, but then all he thinks about is Killing monsters, in addition to being cold and indifferent to things, does not have a fixed personality. A true hero protects people regardless of their species or race, as long as they are innocent. You would think that living a previous life where he had regrets would make him change but no, only in some things. Furthermore, the guy unnecessarily hides his true power with the excuse of making his companions grow and not depend on him, when he could take them to more complicated places and better help them level up, but no, there always has to be the plot. of the protagonist hiding his power, it is a requirement and obligation of the authors for this type of novels.

A gripping story that blends action, emotion, and suspense perfectly. The characters are so well-developed that I found myself rooting for them from start to finish.

Well ......I can't  say that this novel isn't interestingI'll be looking forward for the remaining chapterskeep it up big brotherLove you 💖

Very good start. So far the characters are pretty human feeling and have a decent framework for future development with their flaws and interactions. I also am very much liking the cute slice of life moments that this has primarily been so far. Always can use more cute slice of life. :) There isn’t really any major flaws that I can see so far and overall the writing quality seems pretty good but we shall see if that continues throughout the story as it progresses. There is only one thing that I think might be relevant to critique about so far and that is that Cali seems to not be very curious about her new abilities and features. If I could suddenly fluently read kanji out of nowhere I would be immediately checking if I could read any language or if there was some sort of pattern or restrictions on that ability. Also what about different coding languages? They are essentially the same thing as normal languages just structured in a way that makes it easier to interact with computers. What about sign language? Etc… I think you get what I mean.Also what about her eyes? Did they change to give her that retro reflective effect on the inside of her pupils for night vision? And how are her habits changing? I would 100% recommend having her start writing a journal and document these types of changes and her thoughts on them.Thanks for writing this, you’re doing great. :)

Loving the story, I just can't wait for the intro of the ML. Main FL is super OP but who doesn't love a SSS character? Your writing is clear and concise! Thank you, Author!

The book is well-written and very readable. The story is good so far, and I’m looking forward to Shin’s journey and what will happen to him next. nice one author