I KNOW THAT MANY ARE THINKING THAT THIS NOVEL IS VERY SLOWPACEDAND EVEN I THINK THAT(BUT FROM THE LATEST CHAPTERS I AM DOUBTING THAT IT ISN'T SO CAUSE IN JUST TWO MONTHS AFTER RELEASING THE GAME PEOPLE HAVE REACHED LIKE TRUE EMPEROR REALM AND THERE MIGHT BE SOME PEOPLE ABOVE THAT, THAT HAVE YET TO SHOW UP). SECONDLY, ARE TALENTED PEOPLE THAT COMMON OR ARE TALENTS THAT EASY TO ACQUIRE ? I MEAN HEAVEN GRADE BODIES, IMMORTAL GRADE BODIES, GOD GRADE TALENTS ETC. THE NOVEL HAS DEPICTED MANY PEOPLE WITH SUCH TALENTS AND SOME HAVE EVEN DIED (ISN'T IT A BIT TOO FAST)THIRD, IS CULTIVATION THAT EASY? THERE ARE MANY CULTIVATION NOVEL OUT THERE AND ALL OF THEM TELL ONE THING FOR CERTAIN THAT CULTIVATION IS A VERY LONG AND ARDUOUS JOURNEY, IT'S VERY DIFFICULT TO BREAK THROUGH THE HIGHER YOU GET, THE NOVEL ALSO SHOWS THAT BY INCREASING THE AMOUNT OF QI REQUIRED; BUT PLAYERS HAVE REACHED CLOSE TO THE SAINT REALM IN TWO MONTHS OF CULTIVATION. FOURTH, THERE ARE NO QUESTS. FIFTH, SOME THINGS JUST GIVES THE FEELING OF IT BEING SHORT OR INCOMPLETE (CULTIVATION SYSTEM/ ALCHEMY SYSTEM) SIXTH, THE PART WITH SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY(IS SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY THE ONLY RARE INGREDIENT ? AND IF ITS RARE LATER THAT CONCEPT ALSO KIND OF FADED AWAY AFTER SEEING THE MC GET SO MANY OF THEM) AND IF YOU PICK THE WRONG ONE THEN ALL WILL START WILTING BUT THERE MIGHT ATLEAST BE SOME ALCHEMIST WHO MIGHT/SHOULD HAVE RESEARCHED IT, ARE THE ALCHEMISTS THAT WEAK? AND MC WAS ABLE TO GET THEM ALL ONLY BECAUSE OF THE ALCHEMY GOD'S INHERITANCE(WHICH IS SHOWN AS A TECHNIQUE IN THIS NOVEL) . SEVENTH, IF THE GAME WORLD IS A REAL WORLD AND THE POWERS THERE COULD BE BOUGHT INTO REALITY, THEN THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE SHOWN THE SIGNS BY NOW;I MEAN THE MC DID GO THROUGH MORTAL CLEANSING .SUMMARY- THERE ARE TOO MANY BLANK SPOTS(LOOP HOLES)OUT THERE WHICH LEADS TO THE FEELING OF INCOMPLETENESS. THE NOVEL COULD HAVE BEEN MADE MUCH BETTER .
the mc had the most infuriating personality. every 3 chapters is a repeat of 6 chapters before that just with different charecters. and at the rate the mc is going every person within a 100 miles of him will be a divine dragon. which just takes away from the story. he gives out divine dragon cultivation manuals like he is throwing bread to ducks. he gives his blood away to anyone that looks his direction. and he created another divine dragon which just shouldnt be, he is the biggest show boat nothing but the same old show boat personality, belittling people with skills given to him by the system acting like he worked hard for it. every third paragraph is a description of him having perverted thoughts. he seems obsessed with being above others at all times, and ruining people's lives just for disagreeing with him. the first 70 or so chapters were good and intertwining the rest is relative garbage with a douce and a tool of an mc
Interesting start, of course we have an op protagonist but there are a lot of elements that make this a little bit more “real”. The protagonist is also quite smart (on,y read the 1st 20 chapters) and the pace of the story is quite good, not too slow that you feel there is so much filler chapters.So far an interesting read- looking forward to future chapters.SPOILER:MC transmigrated into a body of an 8 y.o. Whose parents have gone abroad to chase their drams and leave him to support his younger sister and pay off the mortgage the family took. (Worst parents ever but really, we do have parents that abandon their kids or treat their kids badly so not that far off reality).MC was originally a university student so he thought he’ be able to make fast cash but he’s now an 8 y.o. Not exactly an easy hire...Of course he gets his cheat and successfull starts his good business. His chest is recipes and a time dilation space where he can practice. But ingredients and everything else- he needs to buy on his own. :)
I dislike how the mc reacts to the situation he’s in. Literally three generations of this dude’s family have been worked to death, to 0 benefit of any kind. Like, is starving to death better or worse than just working nonstop until your body collapses? Some slaves are treated better and exploited less. However 20 chapters in he has not yet changed his situation further than ‘basically a slave’ to ‘slightly more valuable slave’.
I read a lot of slow pace story, idiot MCs, and those who want to be so called "low-key"this is definitely up there, the MC is one of those genuine idiot who want to "follow the flow" and becoming "low-key" so he doesn't really want strength that much, hench 60 chapters and only in the second qi.The story is repetitive in term of flow, and it's extremely boring. Sure there's a comedy tag on it maybe that's why the characters is idiotic, but i fail to find the comedy in this.
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