Quartion

This story was good starting out but the author obviously has know idea what he is doing it makes no sense why he is not leveling up he has xp stocked up for 100s of chapters the he complains when he’s getting beaten up or always near death when all he needs to do is level up. It’s so annoying he’s said so many times he can easily level up to 5th order but dosent want to and wants to master the abilities he has now that is so stupid he’s been in so many fights that he has already mastered them if this continues I will be dropping it I hope the author sees this in fixes it it makes no sense how can you be so dumb

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interesting how the story was good and the writing quality/tl was decent but that quickly changed, after the 40 free chapters the quality droped considerably for the locked ones

Translation are coming out from mtl and Translator is not even try to put any effect on this book, fking garbage translator and I don’t even know they did they got pick by webnovel.

End of Volume 1 review:Both setting and world building are intriguing and told in a way that blends in the story. Slowly building up everything along the plot and not impeding the flow of the storytelling.The plot is well thought and well planned from the beginning to end. So far the whole volume is cohesive and not episodic. Every detail is connected and not wasted.Characters are always thinking, plotting and motivated in each of their own. They don't feel like being there just to prove that the MC is awesome. You can feel that each of them have their own story to tell. They have their own purpose and their actions tell you who they are.MC's character, background and motivations are well established. He isn't bumbling around doing stuff just because. He is the calculative and plotting type MC and not a typical "goody two shoes trust everyone has a good side"  MC. He learns to fight in the new power system and doesn't really defeat higher tier opponents through brute force. In a way the power tier system is maintained and he doesn't defeat enemy just because of system. The system helps him grow stronger faster than normal but so far that's it.Great  web novel so far.

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The Best Sect Building system i have ever read. Good character building. I just love the way the author started this novel. Hope the author won’t dropped it!!!

I didn’t realize this had an English translation :0 I read this using machine translation like half a year ish ago and can honestly say that even with the quality of machine translation it’s one of my favorite webnovels. It’s got good fights, power progression, amazing character development (besides maybe the blue hair Hainnal family person, or I like most of her character… besides one aspect), and has some really good pacing throughout (it’s short and doesn’t overstay its welcome). The author has a penchant for speaking in symbolic declarations or something every few chapters (like the author will refer to the characters as “the boy”, “the girl”, “the star”, “his world”, etc… idk how to describe it, but it’s really obvious if you read it XD), and I find it kinda funny how often it happens (but also very cool). But yes. I also really enjoy the manhwa (of the same name)! It’s one of the few adaptations that is faithful to the original and actually improve reader experience! Anyway, it’s time for me to reread…