I read this novel in MTL till ch 150 overall novel is good but there are few problems.1) MC is way too OP compared to other characters( no one in his city can even be par with him even after ganging up) still he tries to show he is weakling and often gets into problems2) author's sense of time is completely messed up MC has a full-powered mythical grade beast in just 19 days( according to the author) after transmigration but just by counting the number of days, he mentions it is definitely higher than 30 days.4) story doesn't go into depth about any of the beasts' original civilisation5) even after 150 chaps there is no sign of local intelligent species ( this problem is according to me just make the story dimensionless )
It's a very good way to entertain my selfish imagination, and I would love to have it to add more chapters. When is this going to add more cause it's pretty good and fun for slapping face.
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I wasn't to comfortable with my men, every single second was like I was in hell, Then I went to pandit arvindnand's home and seeing me in that condition, pandit, Arvindnand and his wife, agreed to take me with them, They were treating me like their own son.
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