1. there is no world buildingno idea what kind of world it is, planet? plane? what are the countries? how their world got the dungeons and wild monsters.2. No idea how they got their powers originally. How the level system works. if it is just gaining power and leveling like in a game it's stupid3. there are no strength, agility, stamina stats.. which means basically mc has infinite stamina which is ridiculous4 just the idea that they have game like skills and level up by killing without anything like energy gathering or physical training or skill training is stupid. too much is so wrong.. this is like a story in a game. like imagine you play a game in ps5 and this story is the story of the game
One of my new novels to follow. The development is good as the MC gets stronger as the story progresses. Hipe to read more chapters soon. ......................
Love the way the story keep you coming back for more. Clueless of some characters are cute. And the dominant of other make you to know when they will pounce. I wonder if their will be mpreg in it!
Just an author giving some review to his work 😄The story starts from the roots of everything. The protagonist is vicious, carefree, bossy, self-centered, kind of narcissist. The ending will be explaining. I will be trying to make the story as interesting as i can.😄 Please look forward. *if i need something to improve please let me know. And thank you so much for reading 😁
I am in love with the plotline of your story. I can see you went ahead and took your time to outline the novel for your readers to enjoy. I can't wait for what happens next. Happy writing.
the beginning was great but becomes long-winded, lost focus on the main character and while reading our mind starts wandering instead of focusing on the plot
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