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ANYTHING FOR THE PLOT because the readers here are stupid they will read whatever you write because they are bunch of losers because they like faceslaping and becoming rich and reach at the top of the world where everyone will envy you, girls will be screaming that they want your babies and since the writer is Chinese all the countries like US UK France India Japan Korea are basically dumb and since this is a cooking novel so all the chef's in the world will kneel before him and he will fulfill his propaganda of China's CCP by belittling everyone around the world. But well that's why most of the people are reading this aren't you?????
First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusionfor the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it.in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake hereAs character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is.as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh.as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for nowoverall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novelare Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective
Story is meh, interactions are forced.Fir example: bold agent guy says your wife is a fox spirit.MC be like: Okay.….Bold agrnt guy: that dude is too clam send more people to observe him!Bold dude’s Boss then is like: He is not ordinary so therefore we must recruit him!I can see the strings in this novel so I’ll give it a One star in Story developmentCharacter design is meh so 2 stars.World background is 1 star as the spirit group government agency is like the rest of the novel is very poorly thoughtout.
Well, the story itself is very good. It has all the plot in the background, the plot is great, the characters are good and in short is a great story to read!
What a piece of work😍😍😍I love how the author came out with a great idea👏👏👏This will surely be in my library to read. Highly recommended guys, you won't regret reading it❤️Kudos author more chapters to come🤗🤗🤗
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