This story is interesting however i have a request... Can you put some periods in here & fix the run on sentences cuz back in school the teachers would of failed or made us re-write back in my day.. And many people hate to read things without periods & spacing , you might get more readers fixing this, also you have some letter spacing issues for some of your words but those 2 me isn't a big deal. Gl on the story & looking forward to the rest.
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