Primordial Legacy: The Last Heir of the Forbidden Arts

Loved the book! Keep writing!

It was way to long to get an update for the story.......I feel like i was a rotten tree over here waiting for water.... when will be the next update?

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Anyway... i like it so far. Not that hard to read and the way the world works is quite open and easy to understand so you don’t have to actively try and remember things.The pet system reminds me of “Long Live Summons” so they probably got some serious inspiration their.The only downside for me is that I nor the MC have a real clue on how his “Golden Finger” Works. So this slows down the MC (i think).Pretty good so far.

It's a very good novel and perfect for me.... Thanks author and editor (if any)....I have only read first 💯 chapters hopefully... It remains as interesting as it is now....

Honestly a rough read. The events don't really flow together, it seems to cut and jump. MC gets to do whatever he feels like because he is the MC. I think he could even be considered a Mary Sue

Not much is known about the protagonist before his transmigration, so it’s difficult to see a proper reason for some of his actions.For a supposed serious gamer given a new chance at life, he is lacking in the planning department. He is also neglecting some of the skills inherited from the former host.The harem is bland. Very bland. Even the main girl is bland. All the other girls who were introduced quickly became background characters.Some actions by the higher ups are clearly forced for plot sake.We still know too little about the world he ended in. Feels like the author is making it up as the story advance.

The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people  They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers.  And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world.  Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character.  The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts.  Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected  And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner.  Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests