Nice storyline, however, you sometimes tend to switch from past to present tense and vice versa. I suggest to use past tense throughout the story because it is a lot easier. ?
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Although, it's too early to review this book, I will still give it, because it has an interesting plot, Well designed charactersWriting quality is goodChapter stability is also good. Overall the story is goodπππππππππKeep up the good up author
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I love the pace of the novel.The protagonistβ s isnβt overpowered.Also loving his dao companion.This novel has huge potential.Really hope it gets picked.
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