The author constantly forget what he wrote in the previous chapter/ paragraph/ sentence. Which is almost hilarious, if the writing wasn't so bad. Also, it's a cultivation novel because the Chinese are physically incapable of writing anything else
Awesome Story More plz.this is a really good story kind of fun to see how you're putting the story together it's kind of like how you're doing with it interesting and be kind of fun to see all the technology going to bring in
The story is pretty good.However,i'd advise you to change the cover.The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good.So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story.Apart from this your story is very nice.
The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author can’t stay on track with the characters goals.
Hindi pa man nakakapasok ay agad akong nakarinig ng ungol, marahil galing ito sa loob ng mansyon. Dali-dali akong pumasok sa loob at tumambad sa akin ang kasalukuyang ginagawa ni Wilder at ng isang babae.
Seb and Jace must have come around the corner running from something and were distracted by my being in the hall. Because out of nowhere, four guards sprang in from behind, blades drawn and barreling down on my unsuspecting mates…
"I'm detective inspector Adam Burke," Oversized coat took out his badge as proof. "We're here to investigate the murder of a Carlos Rogers and question Elijah Kingsley's potential involvement."
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