I honestly really like the story and it seems to have a lot of potential but the author seems to always nerf the system or the MC in some way I which is unnecessary. My only complaint other than that the novel is pretty good.
My friend, do you fly away now?To a world that abhors you and I?All that awaits you is a somber morrowNo matter where the winds may blowMy friend, your desireIs the bringer of life, the gift of the goddessEven if the morrow is barren of promisesNothing shall forestall my return
The MC is being led around by the nose, and the author says he is an idiot from the beginning and it really shows. It is so aobvious that its infruraiating. The story capitalizes on the MCs stupidity to further the plot by scamming, tricking, and misleading the MC with terrible vagueness that only he would fall for.It is a really well made story, if you don't mind the MC being lead around and not taking intiative. He mopes around about a past that he was determined to leave behind. The synopsis and intro came of as presenting this as a slice of life novel, where we watch the MC explore the game world with minimal fighting. But nope he just gonna be thrown through the wringer again and become another 'HERO'Just my out look on it, will stop reading it,may come back to it when I feel I can put up with the idiocy of the MC.
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We start heading towards the elevator. Thinking about it. I never got her name. "Hey, I never did get your name. And in case you don't know mine, my name is M- "I get cut off by her scoff.
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