The book is amazing so far, but I think it needs some plot development. I like how the chapters end off on cliffhangers, which I personally like. I wish they could express more details of his rivals, but it's still really good. If this book had an actual Pokemon game with it, with the same storyline, I would buy that game ASAP. DrxpyBoy, I'm really excited for your upcoming chapters! :)
An extremely fast paced story, as in it reads like a summary of what actually happens and the first chapters just add ‘character development’ over and over again.
you need to re edit some of the sentence cuz it was kinda hard to read
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