the novel is very entertaining right from the beginning with its comedic style as well as it's plotline. it's a good read for a day off when just wanting to relax. Good work!
Passive writing style same for the character. Story development is okay?
The concept of the character and the world is pretty interesting and all, but there are lots of holes when in comes to some details that aren't told at all that makes it passive. I felt like I needed to make my own details in my head. so yeah that's pretty much it...
Concept of being a vlogger and getting stronger is nice but the system is like how do we say this... It feels like it's new born it's missing lots of things. The power level of characters feel so different when I try to compare them with the side characters. Ranking of power is pretty badly made ig, Mc also doesn't keep his surrounding in check which kind of annoys me, for my personal opinion that is.
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It's not bad I like it I think it's a good read for your tastes and have a lot of free chapters like a fair amount to think if you like the book and add it or not so there's my downgraded review.
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The concept of the character and the world is pretty interesting and all, but there are lots of holes when in comes to some details that aren't told at all that makes it passive. I felt like I needed to make my own details in my head. so yeah that's pretty much it...
Concept of being a vlogger and getting stronger is nice but the system is like how do we say this... It feels like it's new born it's missing lots of things. The power level of characters feel so different when I try to compare them with the side characters. Ranking of power is pretty badly made ig, Mc also doesn't keep his surrounding in check which kind of annoys me, for my personal opinion that is.
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