I'll be reviewing my novel even though it's quite late already.
First, what I want to say is that, the quality of the works I can't guarantee, maybe it's cause I'm new, I'm hesitant about a few things and can't fully express what i wanted to portray in the story.
For updating stability.... uhm.. hehe, I'm not sure about that one as well.
But anyways, after all my flaws is resolve, I will for sure try to improve this work with a few edits.
So, finally, please do support my novel even if it's lacking quite a lot in some aspect. Thank you!
uff, I don't know about this one guys. The premise of the story is refreshing, "vlogger goes to another world", but it just has so many problems.
In the first tens of chapters, Universe-wide reaching stuff is being foreshadowed.
MC gets super broken stuff very fast without any work at all (Items without grind, Killing intent without fighting more than 2 times) and characters super like mc after having met him once.
Now I know that luck is a thing but this one just piles on and on.
It kinda feels like that every good thing that can happen to an MC like:
-luck, face slapping, having a random girl from school like him, new OP Girl randomly likes him, S Class ability for free, Legendary item for free, System for free, Killing intent for free...
happens to this one.
The Vlogging part also becomes basically a side part of the story 50 chapters in I fell.
Writing
Now, this much is not that much of a problem as the others, considering that the author is a non-native speaker, but anyways there are grammatical errors that will make you pause all over the novel.
Man sorry for the rant, just had such a good premise...
This book has a unique and interesting plot. The setting is good especially when it's in the Philippines! Characters are already interesting. Just need a few more work with using the tenses but so far it's good! Wish you all the best!
What can I say? A grand story? Not only is it unique, but also entertaining! The mc portrays a goofy side of himself and an ambitious vlogger.
I would say that many readers out there looking for something new will find this story interesting and would want to read it. So I undoubtedly recommend this to many of you all.
The text is understandable. As for the story development and character design, they're both great. And as I've reviewed other stories out there, any fantasy world is better than our typical earth, so it is perfect.
Read this novel's chapters and I'm sure, as you get to know what happens in it, you'll be far more invested than you thought you wouldn't be. Well, enjoy!
The author writes much of the story in passive voice. It makes it feel like you're not present for anything. We don't experience the story though the narrative POV, but we're told it in the most boring way.
There are inconsistencies with the narrative distance and focus. For instance, sometimes you get told how someone else thinks, despite it not being established its omniscient POV.
One thing that bothers the most is: What is his motivation?
If the goal is to do a vlog, why does he do it? Money? Its clear vlogging becomes pointless after the first 20 chapters. So at the end of the day, the idea behind this story is a cheap hook to get you reading. Then it turns into the typical wish fulfilment trash.
if the writing quality improves. It would be nice. the story is good but there are mistakes .some things happened fast ....................................................................
Its... alright. The book is good and the story is good. But it feels like reading those mangas that doesn't have any plot at all. Like Slice of Life mangas. The only plot that I've seen is the dungeons.
Its a fun read by yourself, but I guess I don't really see the appeal of vlogging. I'll still continue to read it and check it out in the future again.
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I'll be reviewing my novel even though it's quite late already.
First, what I want to say is that, the quality of the works I can't guarantee, maybe it's cause I'm new, I'm hesitant about a few things and can't fully express what i wanted to portray in the story.
For updating stability.... uhm.. hehe, I'm not sure about that one as well.
But anyways, after all my flaws is resolve, I will for sure try to improve this work with a few edits.
So, finally, please do support my novel even if it's lacking quite a lot in some aspect. Thank you!
In the first tens of chapters, Universe-wide reaching stuff is being foreshadowed.
MC gets super broken stuff very fast without any work at all (Items without grind, Killing intent without fighting more than 2 times) and characters super like mc after having met him once.
Now I know that luck is a thing but this one just piles on and on.
It kinda feels like that every good thing that can happen to an MC like:
-luck, face slapping, having a random girl from school like him, new OP Girl randomly likes him, S Class ability for free, Legendary item for free, System for free, Killing intent for free...
happens to this one.
The Vlogging part also becomes basically a side part of the story 50 chapters in I fell.
Writing
Now, this much is not that much of a problem as the others, considering that the author is a non-native speaker, but anyways there are grammatical errors that will make you pause all over the novel.
Man sorry for the rant, just had such a good premise...
I would say that many readers out there looking for something new will find this story interesting and would want to read it. So I undoubtedly recommend this to many of you all.
The text is understandable. As for the story development and character design, they're both great. And as I've reviewed other stories out there, any fantasy world is better than our typical earth, so it is perfect.
Read this novel's chapters and I'm sure, as you get to know what happens in it, you'll be far more invested than you thought you wouldn't be. Well, enjoy!
There are inconsistencies with the narrative distance and focus. For instance, sometimes you get told how someone else thinks, despite it not being established its omniscient POV.
One thing that bothers the most is: What is his motivation?
If the goal is to do a vlog, why does he do it? Money? Its clear vlogging becomes pointless after the first 20 chapters. So at the end of the day, the idea behind this story is a cheap hook to get you reading. Then it turns into the typical wish fulfilment trash.
Its a fun read by yourself, but I guess I don't really see the appeal of vlogging. I'll still continue to read it and check it out in the future again.