Please Forget Me

when Susan was walking in the hall way she was upset but she wasn't going to let her get to her so she calmed herself and walked tours the lunchroom to meet up with Hanna, she was going to ask her about this girl to see if what ever she said was true, she was right about telling TJ about it but first she wanted to know a little bit more about this girl to see if it was even true that shes been knowing TJ. Its not like she was going to stop liking him is just that she wanted to know if she was his ex or something.

In his mind ran the previous fight, contemplating each decision he had made. Was he too predictable? Was he too rash in his choices? Perhaps, but with someone as fast as Yijun, he didn't have the opportunity to dawdle on his own thoughts. He trusted his body to react; his countless years of training to defeat his enemies.

Matanda:tama ang iyong narinig,wala kapang anak .ako ang magiging daan sa pagkakaroon mo ng anak ngunit may kapalit.

She sighed. "Just go to bed. I'll make your favourite muffin tomorrow."

"Are you sure this is a good idea?" James said, hesitant to stop me. "We don't know what this could do to us."

" Allen? Allen Smith? That young man?" Yet, another shocking news struck the old man hard to his mind. Adrian nodded. This was not a secret between him and his family members. Allen Smith, the only heir of Welden Smith, a world-famous legendary figure underworld.

Garret: Bradley! Make haste to the east!

It’s a new work but it’s got me hooked! Great writing quality and interesting setting thus far, the authors humor shines through and the first chapter after the prologue was perfect 😂  the main character has very relatable interactions with the other characters and it feels very grounded and thought out work so far. I’m looking foreword to more!

Since I'm my biggest fan of myself, the plot thickens at Chapter 40 😋

Good story, captivating to read while eating! Thumbs up

Overall a pretty good story considering the common premise and the common copy and paste of this kind of genre. However the author actually does this differently, although the mc has a major advantage of “being two people” it is a reasonably a fair cheat while the mc still has to fit into the framework that everyone else does while trying to make the most of his advantages along with planning to the best of his ability but not out of what can be consider a normal human. As for characters, the characters although not perfect, that is what makes them good because they have that small spark of humanity that will allow future development. Now let’s get into world background hasn’t been developed enough for me to give the green light or red light about it, which is good because if a story reveals to much background at once for no good reason the readers will feel bored and unable to get that sense of discovery along with the mc. Now onto advice for the author: 1. Don’t fall into the trap of my mc is perfect or he can’t make mistakes because that will annoy readers yes some readers may complain or leave but that won’t be the majority, 2. Don’t be afraid to punish your mc for his mistakes, mistakes generally come with consequences, whether it is tripping because you weren’t paying attention to where you are walking, or generals losing a part of their army because they mispredicted the enemies moves, 3. Have a hint of randomness in your story something not even you can predict, some of the best stories have hints of randomness to them, you could even get a wheel with a bunch of random events that you want to happen but aren’t sure how to implement them then spin it every 10 or 20 chapters, and if the event can be fit in the story  with the mc’s current situation put it in then your mc has a random event that he will have to adapt to, but don’t try to force it because the. You will just be reducing the quality of the story rather than improve it. (Also I left everything vague so there will be pretty much no spoilers) anyway hope you all enjoy this story as much as I am and hope you all have a great day imma go back to reading