Playing with Fire #1 ✔

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My name is Senshi Arako. I'm sixteen years old. Until a few months ago, I studied at the Sarashwati Academy of the Spiritually and Uniquely Gifted , a boarding school at Arjuna City, on the Sri province.

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I love this novel, it is a great read. However I would like to offer some feedback. It is a bit too slow almost 80 chapters and we still haven't seen much yet and almost no fights. I like the MC and the story but in my opinion you should speed up the plot a bit you don't have to do anything drastic but simply increase the speed a bit. Hope this helps❤

The story line is generally captivating and the fight scenes are something to look forward to although there’s room for improvement this story definitely has the potential for becoming the next big thing

Hi. Author here. I just want to mark my progress so far.

I love the emotion and i love the story development pace. You are brewing something nice. i hope to read the story with the same momentum you are creating dear Author!