Player Awakening: I Become A Lord In Game-Like World

You are such an amazing storyteller! Well written and nice plotting.looking forward to reading more exciting stories from you....

I chose this book because of the reviews, but was disappointed. The author wrote about a subject that she is not familiar with, so there are inconsistencies. The storyline and conversations felt awkward. Also, the book has a lot of grammatical errors and the wrong gender was used frequently.

I cant really offer anything much of criticism as of yet.  The story starts out with the MC getting a weak pet cat as a contract beast who needs to be able to fight with ferocious monsters.  He gains a nurturing system that allows him to progress the contract beast's state as long as the MC does things that make it happy.  He can upgrade the quality of the bloodline as well as it's level progression.  He is also able to increase other aspects of his beast.To start off his little cat is female, so based on the title I was actually expecting it to quickly gain human form.  From what I have read so far it requires some nurturing.  Also even before gaining human form the cat has some human attributes, such as jealousy and affection.  The cat always wants to sleep in his bed with him.  This should not be a problem, but it looks like in CH20 it gains a loli-human form.  This could pose a problem with many of the readers here.  I will update my review based on further reading.As of now I enjoyed the content and found it to not be displeasing from the storytelling standpoint.  It seems to be better written then many similar stories, though the system design and progression seems to be a bit weak.

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Any recommendations as to where to read the MTL with actual pokemon names? please T_T                                                                              

So this is start of story of Unkillable Demon King?Faker vs Ryu xDFaker! What was that!?I can't he won that duel!One of most Iconic 1 vs 1Hahahaha xD

Whoa. Complex characters and backgrounds. A really well thought out setting too. I almost got too lost in the world. This is going to turn out really well, I can tell. Keep up the good work!

This novel is good ...Some cons:1.arrogant character2.no love but MC is playboy but no harem3. MC is too overpowered and arrogant5. Some cliche stuffsPros:1. I like it2. I like it3. I like it