writing again terrible writing skill, trash grammar, mess of pacing, bit of Yuri between female lead and her mother, (yes anything seksual between females it's Yuri)
I liked the boook but some part of that book doesn't allow me to give full ratings. I am also not able to tell what's wrong here. Please take it positively author.
I enjoyed how the mc is low key but at the same time he is now a beta mc. He is very assertive with what he wants.Another point is the world building, i loved the world that the author build. It’s a mix of Japan and UK.Just one point, I would like to recommend the author to explore in the future movies companies too.
In all honesty the 1st chapter was a little rough and very simple, but as each chapter goes on you can tell the author begins to improve; The characters become a little more developed and the world that the Author is crafting begins to grow a little bigger. Their story begins to develop and start to take form with each chapter that's made and it's easily to tell that they are learning and improving.It's a great little story that has room to grow and continues to do so.You may have to wait a bit but it's worth the wait.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
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