1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. Follow me for exp ;)16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;)17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
Ничего не понятно, нудно и скучно. Мир сложный, и его не раскрывают. Персонаж глупый. Второстепенные персонажи бесят...Положительных моментов я тут вообще толком не разглядел, за что и низкая оценка.
First of all thank you author for the nightmare I'll have tonight. Now since this work has only one chapter rn so there's limited information but for the first I'm getting a feeling that this work is going to be superb especially from the synopsis that make you imagine few things. I do sleep with my window open to get some cold pleasant air which now I believe I won't be opening till I forget this.By reading the first chapter and synopsis I can definitely say that this work will really horrify you and give you some goosebumps. Lastly I'll say the author to update it more and to keep his word to update it atleast 3 times a week, I will definitely read it once I get used to what I read today.
Veer looked toward Arya and said "Of course there are restrictions. It is better to say that those restrictions changes in laws of nature. In different places in the universe, five elements have different laws associated with them due to the certain conditions in that part of the universe. Those conditions might be related to the suns, stars, the speed of moving of planet or even the size and distance from their sun. And while moving from one place in the universe to another, our soul does not feel any restriction but those places are unknown territories because our soul and body only know the places they are at. So, normally yogis do not travel to those parts of mortal worlds unless they receive a command from nature itself or become one with nature. Once a yogi becomes one with nature, he can be anywhere anytime in this universe like nature itself."
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