Phantom Me

I want to say, "Let's get out of here," but I just can't.

"oh,Im sorry.Did I scare you?"

Dante:...todo mundo tem uma história triste por aqui?

"Wh....What!? Did you say!? "

After gathering outside the gate. Saya asked a question.

The novel did have evrything to have a great plot, but the Author decides to go with the Harem route, evry time the MC safes someone realy important (fighting capabilities/important background or some super Power) you guess it.... it's a Girl/Women or even a loli, i don't even care over the deus ex machina to Safe the MC or his friends evry time **** hits the fan, but the first time the Author went full deus ex cause the MC was done for, it was mostly done so he could add another women to his harem, so if you like a novel like that enjoy....

The MC is not edge lord and thank god it is not a system novel. Book is good. Atleast Give it a try before passing judgement. My first issue is pacing. The pacing is too fast paced and stabilized somewhere around 50 chapters. Hope author continues it that way otherwise it feels like watching a YouTube video on 4x speed. Second issue is main characters are training day in and day out. There is not enough break. From readers POV it would too overwhelming as they are productive every chapter posted. To offside it, show how MC and similar are interacting like going outside doing something entertaining etc. it kinda takes readers mind off but the transition should be organic. MC is becoming too OP too fast. Even without system cheats MC is becoming OP too fast. Better make the MC settle for sometime and make readers adjusted. Naruto is a story which takes more chapters to fully explore. So it is best if author takes it slow and explores more. Author specific:- If you are serious about writing this fic, Try to look in reddit sub threads for novels with high intense fight narration. It might help writing more flushed out fight scenes. Fight scenes are the bread and butter of Naruto fic. The story premise would be same for all the thousands of fics but if you want your fic to stand out you need to bring in more to the table. Overall it is 4 out of 5. Let me know about the criticism author if you have read the review.

An intriguing tale that has plenty of humor but is a little lacking in describing certain characters.

I really fill bad 😞, because shen yuan is a good girl

It’s a word-for-word copy of Reverend Insanity. It’s not even funny. This should be illegal. 🤡🤡🤡Might as well call this a fanfic.🤦u200d♂️

Hello! To new readers of this novel:Some may find the first arc of this novel "The Struggle for Survival" vague or boring after reading a few chapters.Dear reader! I advise you not to rush into judgment and to give this novel a chance, starting from the second arc "The Beginning". I promise you that things will slowly improve.