😩😩😩😩🤢🤢🤢🤢😫😫😫😫😭😭😭😭😭 Finale chapter is such a let down... I thought he'd b famous internationally then learn about that was hidden in the mortal world but this happened!!!!I have such a big expectation yet was let down at the end... what's the point of Wang Yao cultivate then and have some magical power? About those ghost? That mountain of his? Feng shui?
I’ll huh nvm I u is a great game but it’s still not very Jesus I play this one time and it’s still fun but it doesn’t make it a lot better but it doesn’t make it much better then play the games you have game play you have a great play play game play with friends play your game and then you go play your games all you have game and play games and then play the games all you have game and play games all day and play it is the way it to you play games and play it and then you play the whole time it and then play the games all the way you can go eat it all over the world star game pass
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: WQ- could be better, keep working on it.;,;. SoU- no complaints here.;,;. SD- What story development, I mean, there is a little bit, but it is mostly an information dump... CD- well, you have given the MC a lot of design, but lack when it comes to other characters, they almost don't exist... WB- did it with an information dump, but definitely covered it fully.;,;.Positive Feedback: Good job on your world background and keeping your story updated at a constant pace... you told your readers before hiatus too, so good on you.;,;.Personal Feedback: I think this is a decent foundation to a story, but it would have been if you wrote all of this information down near the beginning for yourself, and slowly explained it through the story.;,;. I apologize, but I will not be continuing your story... for the sake of those who enjoy it, I hope you continue until it is finished.;,;.Scores: WQ 4/5 SoU 5/5 SD 1/5 CD 3/5 WB 5/5 total 3.6/5
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