great light novel love it good story as well as character good player but to not the best or him being op. only thing that's not good is its like 1 chapter a month
This story is going to give me some Lu's Time vibe, LoL Chinese Anime, because it is about a guy who is trying to become a good MOBA player. Also, I was expecting to see a guy trying to become good in LoL but eh... MOBA is MOBA
Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4)
Your writing is not made, there are a few mistakes and the wording is either too much added words or worded weirdly.
Update Stability: 5/5
I give that too everyone
Story Development: 4/5
Not bad; the pacing and plotline is good.
Your story is very interesting, and the first chapter is hookable which is important.
Character Design: 4/5
I like your MC, but I still feel a disconnect to him.
World Background 3.5/5 (rounds to four)
I like the world behind your story, but I feel like I don't know much pertaining to your story; especially with the game.
A story about Esports? The story itself is unique cause considering that this platform has a lot of resurrection genre, cultivation genre, magic genre, etc genre. This story is refreshing, cause I get bored with mc with op or mc that are genius being an arrogant bastard that always f ck with woman. I'm getting tired.
This story is refreshing, thank you for writing it, and don't stop! You have potential!
I don't know how I got hooked on your novel this easily. Prob because I play League.
Take my five stars. Damn you.
Jokes aside, I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel. Real thoughts, fluid conversations, toxic adcs... Everything feels so real. There's nothing to criticize for me.
I'm not a fan of gaming but your book illustrates the settings, thoughts and emotions of the players all too well. It reminds me of The King's Avatar movie. I don't have background knowledge for gaming so reading the first part confuses me at first. But as I read on, it gets better and you depicted it well. Nice job author!
kakakaka. I like such novels which go back in time and rebirths
Waiting for more chapters
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Your writing is not made, there are a few mistakes and the wording is either too much added words or worded weirdly.
Update Stability: 5/5
I give that too everyone
Story Development: 4/5
Not bad; the pacing and plotline is good.
Your story is very interesting, and the first chapter is hookable which is important.
Character Design: 4/5
I like your MC, but I still feel a disconnect to him.
World Background 3.5/5 (rounds to four)
I like the world behind your story, but I feel like I don't know much pertaining to your story; especially with the game.
This story is refreshing, thank you for writing it, and don't stop! You have potential!
I don't know how I got hooked on your novel this easily. Prob because I play League.
Take my five stars. Damn you.
Jokes aside, I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel. Real thoughts, fluid conversations, toxic adcs... Everything feels so real. There's nothing to criticize for me.
Patiently waiting for new updates.
Waiting for more chapters
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