PATH OF THE STAR HUNTER

Great novel ❣️....... ......    ..........

I've read the first 49 chapters, and so far, I have nothing serious to complain about. The protagonist has a tragic past that adds depth to the character, providing an interesting path for development. The world where the story takes place offers many fascinating possibilities.

The only thing I have to complain about is the changes in narrative perspective and when the author reveals something that will happen in the near future, only to later return to the present and describe how that thing happened. Both complaints are based on my opinion, and others may find them positive.

I hope the author continues writing this novel and improves more and more.

the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao
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This story would be an absolute gem if the author kept the story in third person. using dialogue between characters for character and plot development. Needs a proofreader and editor to help fix grammar writing style consistency .