Path of the Apex King

Jack would stay and fight until all the food was eaten and every Blue Ant was dead…

  I was lying with my stomach up. My eyes were closed and Stark hand was on my hip. "You're staring" I say, my eyes closed. "I'm gazing" he corrects, putting a strand of hair behind my ear. "It is creepy" I say, finally opening my eyes and turning to him briefly. "It's romantic" he corrects, once again, gently kissing me on the lips. I felt like he was my one true love. I was not thinking about Deagon, whatsoever. All I was thinking was that Stark somehow loved me and I. the same. Can I, the Beast, fall in love with the Beauty?

'What is this room?'

Madisgood race is normaly like that, they speak in a high tone.

Hard to read , there's many grammatical errors, plot is alsi not going smoothly.