I’ve only read the first 50 chapters but I enjoy the story so far. I got annoyed at some of the character interactions, for example: I don’t like talking to kids like they are stupid, but it didn’t ruin the story. I feel as though it has gotten better the more I have read and I was tempted to drop at first but am glad I gave it a chance.
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Well, the concept of the story is nice. Minor grammatical errors that can be fixed in a jiffy and other than that I feel some paragraphs were a bit long but I have the same problem but otherwise I think it's a well thought out concept
Although Chi had added seals that would instantly clean floors, walls, counters, tables, chairs, and other objects; a place like this needs staff to deal with laundry, making sure the lawn and gardens were maintained, taking account on supplies, and other numerous tasks that runes and seals could not do. It would require for her to actually hire people to create the staff, however Chi doubts that there would be anyone available who would want to work for a prince who was exiled.
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