Para D

I only really have one comment, and it’s vital that the person publishing this book on here reads it: Please, for the love of god, find someone to handle the grammar for you. Find a proper translator to handle this so it doesn’t look so blocky or cut off in areas.I read the last book you had on here, but after a while, the grammar started causing massive headaches. Your story has plenty of potential, you’re a great Storyteller. However, you NEED to find someone who can make it look more readable. You will scare away hundreds of potential readers who can’t handle this lack of care towards the language and the story. Otherwise, you’re doing great. Just make sure you work hard to find someone who has English as their first language to properly go through and fix the grammar. Using translation tools DOES NOT WORK.

When reading this novel it can't be helped that you will compare it with IRASIf only compared with IRAS you will see that :- The MC isn't as likable as Zhang Ye(And Zhang Ye is infuriating sometimes)-The "Funny" part isn't that funny-The antagonists are even worse-The reactions from the audience sucks(You don't really feel them enjoying it feels very mechanical) But the story isn't that bad, is pretty average it just doesn't have anything that standout(India setup maybe?)Maybe is my fault for expecting moreOh and at least till I've read it, there is no racism, which is a good pointBut really the antagonists manages to be even pettier than in IRAS(which is quite a feat by itself)

Hidden gem!  I don't know how this wonderful novel is not popular yetI thought it was going to be boring at first, but after reading 27 chapters, it was amazing

Dropped. The synopsis is great. Just the writing is unbearable. It makes ne lose brain cells. Despite that I continued until the first interaction in chapter 5 which makes me think that either the characters are retarded or the author is.

It was confusing initially, but as the characters grow, we get to know more about the world. Great story! Definitely recommend it to anyone who likes kingdom building.

This is trash beyond trash iredeemable trash unrecyclable trash this proves the author too is nothing but trash. There are tons of Web novels which have a western style to them which are really good eg book eating magician ( Chinese harry potter) if you are really that brainless and retarded that you cannot even follow their example just stick to your cultivation novel style and stop disgracing western style writing you piece of trash author. Because of you qidian should give a -negative star rating system that would be the true rating of this piece of trash produced by you a piece of trash author.

He then turned his back to Yami and said "You can go around and look for a place to sleep for us. I will need to do a few things now."

"I told you we should have done rotations! You were walking to your death and if it wasn't for me, you'd be one with nature." She said, quite angry with me.