This is prime example how you do NOT write a good fantasy novel. The story is all over the place. Characters act like a binary code - one second they are admiring mc, then over some non-existant cause they are out to gouge his eyes with a spoon (real people don't act like that, which may be a surprise for author). Mc himself is badly written mary sue. The world is generic and rules are non existant, cause author writes them down ONLY for the mc and any other character to break them in the next paragraph. Oh, also "zoomer language" is not helping. Over all this is worst novel, no, worst piece of media I saw in a LONG time. So am I writing this? Well, you see, this TEXT is somehow 4th place in rating, hence why I picked it up. Turns out, you should never trust in ratings.
It's me. I feel like this will be a better novel in terms of writing than my previous one; Sovereign of Divinity. I will be publishing chapters on both of them, maybe twice a week. Thanks you
Should I read this? From the synopsis, feel like it would be the "Let the game begin" vibe.. Asking people do some nearly impossible stuff in order to live... And he put it in livestream?.
You got all my stones for the day, Keep going!As a review for readers... I read a lot. This interests me. I think the story has a unique flow that reminds me of maybe only one other thing I've read, and even that only due to some similarity in tone. I'm enjoying the different pressures on the MC and his work to orient himself. I think the side characters could stand to be a bit deeper, as they've switched out quickly so far. That said there has been some reason to do so, and what we do see of them is relatively solid, though stereotypical at times. A bit of cringe when the woman is overtaken by her maternal instincts as her brother acts as a cold young master. The main worry I have for the novel as it progresses is how/if it will form a deeper plot beyond the current motivation of "growing to survive". However, that is a common issue and this story has a decent foundation to build something good. You can see the author playing with different narrative tricks at different points, which is fun in itself. Overall, it will be fun to watch both this author and the story grow. Its on my primary reading list, and I invited other readers to do the same.
Love this book. Can't wait for the updates this book has been one of my top favorite to read so far on this app.i have told all my friends and family about it.
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