- Simp paradise. He meets a girl online, 5 mins. later he gives her 10 million dollars after listening to her sob story. MC was a martial arts master with 40+ years of experience. He reincarnates into a 15 year old and acts like a 12 year old. His 40+ years of maturity and knowledge vanishes. He speaks with inexperience and naïveté. The earlier chapters are filled with plotholes. The author tries his best to cover them up later in the story but it causes inconsistencies in the plot moving forward. The outline of the story is decent enough for me to have stuck around for as long as I did, but the plot development and inconsistencies just ruins it for me. If you’re into annoying MC’s who bully their bestfriend and is a MAJOR simp, then this book is for you.
it look like a promising novel but it was never given the chance it's had a great start better than some of the other novels that came out well that's all I got to say
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A unique name and an intresting story, with the information in sypnosis and the few chaps I read, There is a huge potential in this novel if the pace and quality is matched. weldone author.
I don't know how the author does it, but with every passing chapter the story gets better and better. I know a bit more about the story than the crowd here as I'm a beta reader. Still I can't wait for y'all to see what happens in the future.
Apolion, the god of the sun, wakes up in the middle of the night and reaches out for his sword at the nightstand, and only relaxes when he feels the cold embrace of its hilt. He takes a deep breath and let go of it, ashamed of his fear, improper of a god. If his sister saw him now she would mock him for being scared in his own palace. He kicks his blanket and lays spread out in bed as he stretches, flexing the body that made many maidens in the temple fall in love with the sun.
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