OXYGEN |Shubman Gill Fanfiction|

this is a great novel and i found it very interesting.it is a must read from my side.

I am now dropping this story. I can take alot of cliches for example girl reincarnating, wanting to be an actress, walking into the bathroom when someone is showering by mistake, overcoming any difficult situation no matter how high the odds, rich and powerful male lead, enemy families. I can even put up with a rape scene if it's the right reasons. What I can't stand is when a man kicks a female out of his house after sleeping with her once and than becomes obsessive with her two days later. He becomes so bad that he stalks her and wont let her move out of the apartment, his grandmother let her borrow, because he wants to live with her alone. He forces kisses on her and when she asks him to leave her alone because she's not his possession. Well it flips a switch in him and  he keep saying she's his and they are going to marry.His friends and family don't help the matters calling her sister in law no matter how often she asks them to stop.To me this is not a budding romance, it's the beginning of Stockholm syndrome.  It pained me to read over 80 chapters I don't know how people actually read over 2800 chapters of this.

Tiba di kamar, Ivanka melihat ke dua anak nya sudah terlelap dan Harry terlihat sedang melamun sesuatu.

it was a normal day as routine just got up and  went to the kitchen to drink water and near the dinning table she slipped because of the water jug broke because of a rat which had come in house .And as Nisha slipped she got a painful ake and the Reuben took her to the hospital immediately  and the doctors said "the kid is no more ☹ "Nisha was in a shock she was tensed and Reuben was also  very sad and shocked .

*Ding successfully obtain MERLIN MAGIC SWORD

"It's true that you are going out with Ren?!"Yuki ask Yui .But Yui didn't respond she was shock when she heard Yuki asking her that.

"No, let's watch a romantic"

" All I could hear is just a moan "

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

" Ok Mr Tomo

Your story is beautiful, but you have to make some grammatical adjustments to it, you can learn from it and in the end you will become a good writer 👍

As the chapters progress, it's strange and unusual, there's a lot of mystery around the main characters, and it makes me look forward to what's next every time 9/10Building the world, this world, people live in the standard of strong and weak, reputation and status, there are all kinds of heroes and demons spread in the world spreading their names, anyway, the power system is unique, and is based on 4 aspects, talent, weapon, and which They call it the ego, the path, the most mysterious yet, the level. There are still no higher worlds or anything that indicates this, the highest level is rank 8, the cultures in this story are divided between 4 cultures, the Morim, the nobles, the magicians, and the monster humans.I give it 10/10, that's unique and exciting The fights are simply amazing, at first the difference is huge, but in close battles, intelligence, cunning, courage and different styles are displayed. There are events brewing, and tribes are fighting, everyone is doing their job based on their interests, and that makes it more exciting than just random fighting. There is no harem yet, and there is no exact indication of it. There are some minor hints of romance, but they have no impact on events. This is a genius move, author. Yes, definitely, 10/10!