Writing Quality is good, there are little to no errors, some sentences were rough but still acceptable, how you describe something is a little bit lacking. Stability of Uodates is not consistent enough. Story Development is too fast paced. In Chapter 1 things happened too quickly, and there are some keypoints missing like, but since it's only starting, I guess it will be explained on the next chapters(If it will have) Character Design is acceptable. It lacks description on how the MC looks and what his personality is.World Background is also good, so no complaints there.
This novel is hilarious. I laughed so much throughhout the whole thing. The meme factor is through the roof, trolling skills to the extreme. Great for a laugh, and the story isn’t all that bad either.
haaah... dont read... it a typical: your sister is not your sister and she's OP but not OP, your above average but your still average, everyone hates you and you have no friends oh but you have best friends? (so you don't NOT have friends).. your power level 9000 but even the pre schoolers can kill you; kinda novel thats all over the place... I could not for the life of me push past chapter 7
I'm not sure why people are falsely giving this good ratings than it actually deserves, are their standards so low? I read 50chap which are free before deciding to stop wasting my time with this.Chapters have so many errors, inconsistencies, grammar, spellings which breaks your immersion, even with readers pointing them out in paragraph comments Author didn't feel the need to fix it, shows much he cares about it.Author sometimes say MC use mana then in next paragraph it's Qi. What?? "I have eyes but failed to see mount tai" typical Chinese saying, tell me is there a mount tai in that game world? if not why did someone from that world say it? it feels so wrong. MC and his friends goes on calling each other brother, brother, brother it's super awkward. His friend spend thousands of years in game before MCs arrival yet there's no visible changes in his personality, he acts like a child along with MC and emotional moments are so forced.Author uses CAPITALS to convey emotions are screaming/anger instead of describing them, feels like it's written by a school kid. Story isn't original either, just another isekai but worse with chinese copy paste. The way they use "hidden" expert and other bs is just ugggh.
2 stars for writing quality.the first difficult to understand because of the chaotic displacement of views in the novel. such as from the third view to the views of the main character and vice versa, and or from the view of the main character to the views of other characters and vice versa, and or the third view to the views of other characters and vice versa.second. too few signs to distinguish conversations, thoughts or narratives.2 stars for stability updates.first update unstable could be 1ch / day, 2ch / day, 3ch / day, 1ch / 2 days, and 3ch / 2 days.second. no notice about chapter update1 star for story development.first just follow the same story round get power, revenge / get conflict, finish it (beat / kill / embarrass), get new strength again, and re-repeat. without any plot twist.second. lack of explanation of what, who, where, why, and how at the core of each chapter.third. it seems that the author is very lazy to develop the storyline.1 star for character design.firstly very little explanation of the core character and finally as the story progresses it looks like a side character.second. some side characters disappeared without any explanation at all.third. looks like an author wants to keep his characters mysterious. but ultimately making the characters seem unimportant in the story because the author pointing that mindset of the main character is the core of the storyline.1 star for world background.world background is really bad. because the author is only concerned with the turn of the story that I mentioned in the development of the story.this is the review without mention the author's view.*my original language is not english. so forgive me if i am wrong with the english.
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