So far, very good. Non-Linear Progression of Plot. Feels like an RPG with side quests in between. Very Nice pacing.
Also characters are very in touch, though I won't be able to get to a proper conclusion until I get to know their quirks better as the story progress. Excited to read more.
The story is good so far,I hope it's remain same in the future, The Interaction between MC and FL is good.
The writing quality is very good.
Keep up the good work 👍
Okay. I'm gonna be honest here. This story is really well written so far. So well written in fact that, when a 'specific' character of a 'specifically high' status, that is either actively in a scene or talked about, I literally almost cringe. The fact that I'm able to 'feel' the psychosis of this character just based on the way he speaks is astonishing and really cringey. And I mean that as a compliment. Other than that I'm really excited to see where this story goes. I think the dynamic between each character, no matter the relationship, is easy to feel and understand. The villainess is, obviously, cute on many levels. I don't like that the main character won't say what she really feels to the 'specifically high status' character, but I'm not really complaining here because I understand why. I'm just being impatient 😄 haha. Anyway continue doing your best. Can't wait for the next chapter.
The comedic and cute elements in this story is an added bonus and definitely brings out the charm and sense of humor of the characters, especially Analissa! Girl definitely does not have her priorities straight.
I'm in love with this story been reading and accompany since a month ago and I've enjoyed every update, the story development is going well, every update makes me even more interested in the MC and FML relationship [img=recommend]
While it doesn’t bring much new to the equation of saving the villainess otome isekai otome game more than makes up for it in some of the best excecution I’ve seen in some time.
Characters: The protagonist and love interest are likeable and have great chemistry, the antagonist is deliciously hatable but not too the degree where it effects the readers suspension of disbelief, (as a side people like that exist I have met them), side characters aren’t neglected at all and have enough spotlight placed on them that they are memorable but not so much that they steal the spotlight from the main cast.
Pacing: it retains a good forward momentum so that you feel like something worth reading has happened but doesn’t feel rushed. Plot points don’t feel needlessly dragged out and every word feels as if it serves a purpose rather than being there to increase word count.
Settings: the setting is a typical magic school otome setting nothing really of note here but the story is character driven so that doesn’t retract from the quality overall.
Release rate: a good stable one chapter per week with consistent quality, minimal typos, and moderate length.
Writing Quality: Great, it’s clearly been properly proofread, the author clearly cares about this story and i haven’t run into any instances where I had to read a section more than once to figure out what’s going on.
PS: to the author, originality is overrated, execution is far more important so don’t take my comment on “not bringing anything new to the equation” as a negative point.
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Also characters are very in touch, though I won't be able to get to a proper conclusion until I get to know their quirks better as the story progress. Excited to read more.
The writing quality is very good.
Keep up the good work 👍
P.S: freaking love the maid 🤍 🖤
Não sei oq dizer, história muito boa ein galera br
so vai
arrocha
Characters: The protagonist and love interest are likeable and have great chemistry, the antagonist is deliciously hatable but not too the degree where it effects the readers suspension of disbelief, (as a side people like that exist I have met them), side characters aren’t neglected at all and have enough spotlight placed on them that they are memorable but not so much that they steal the spotlight from the main cast.
Pacing: it retains a good forward momentum so that you feel like something worth reading has happened but doesn’t feel rushed. Plot points don’t feel needlessly dragged out and every word feels as if it serves a purpose rather than being there to increase word count.
Settings: the setting is a typical magic school otome setting nothing really of note here but the story is character driven so that doesn’t retract from the quality overall.
Release rate: a good stable one chapter per week with consistent quality, minimal typos, and moderate length.
Writing Quality: Great, it’s clearly been properly proofread, the author clearly cares about this story and i haven’t run into any instances where I had to read a section more than once to figure out what’s going on.
PS: to the author, originality is overrated, execution is far more important so don’t take my comment on “not bringing anything new to the equation” as a negative point.