Origin Null - Part 1: How did this turn into an Eroge???

for the people that wanna find the missing pieces you need shalvation

Though what you said may be true for certain mc personalities, the one in this is not of that material. When I say he is shameless Iam not talking about his lack of skills in getting women but his outrageous bargaining skills. His deals make you feel like he had no interest in making a deal and is just here to pick a fight. And if he is that serious type of mc you talked about shouldn't he work on that instead of hitting on girls half-heartedly. Either he should be the guy you said or at least get the girls he tries for properly.

Lol yeah I f*ck*n hate Japanese mc's except for.some seinen mc's like Guts who have an actual personality outside of "introverted self insert with a strong sense of justice and an empty void in the head and between the legs"

do you have any schedule?

love the story and I like the characters

it needs a lot of editing. the pronouns keep being switched.

Such a roller coaster of love!!! great characters and amazing writing.  love it!

Ending makes no sense ! The book can’t be finished