Online Game: Confessing to a Noble Lady at the Start

I am truly impressed by the author, honestly speaking if there ever was someone who would trade in a pile of gold solid gold for a worthless pile of rubbish it's this author right here. The starting and world foundation was excellent not too tiring to read exciting even the first chapter was dark and promising then Lord knows what happened but he or she decided to try and copy the brilliant comedy of a well known and loved mercenary and failed horribly. The world was amazing to imagine the mc with so much promise wasted. You can read it if you like but it'll most likely frustrate you in a bad kind of way. Author should have stuck to what you had it was magic

Really good, just wish the MC didn't let the women in his life push him around. He really needs to learn to say no. His whole family women are trashy people.

interesting storyline with lots of new ideas

it could be an awesome story if the MC wasn't such trash and arrogant he's basically nothing without the system and is perverted for no reason but great writing

"One doesn't actually needed a lantern to venture the unknown of a murky lake. They need an explosive and a diving suit." - MF, the paranoid strategist chuckled.Writing: grandiose, you could find the best quality of use idioms and metaphors here, not mentioning that the mc is a poet herself.Character: MF is a devious schemer and a master of improvisation. If a person took one step, the mc already did 100 steps while also predicting the exact spot of not only one person, but other 100 people exact length and wide of the step they took. Every of her action have reasons but physically and psychologically. Not because she is a genius, but because she is the culmination of hard workStory progression: It's gratifyingly satisfying, you will be grinning while fondling your finger as those mortals got played within the mc's plan.A very satisfying book about the unbecoming devil.

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The story is really good! I love how Sage always looks after his mom and tries to find a way to save her! I hope she will one day wake up and make him happy! And the game theme is the best too! I love it and would recommend it to everyone!