One in a million

Overall not great but not horrible. Now the reason I came to my conclusion: writing quality no major errors noticed, strangely used opinions by mc that have no connection ([example] thoughts based on ideals of groups or organizations that do not exist in the current world), story development feels very slow and often times can be set aside without feeling a sense of urgency to prolong reading, character design is left mainly in nondiscription with few details about characters given, world background is only given to the reader in a sense of novel title otherwise no towns, city, forest, country, road, home is ever named directly (within the first 30 chapters locations that can be given life or even a name are countable with one hand). To finalize everything, novel is hit and miss

hello I'm the author of the book and  i have  changed  a few chapters so, read them again ok sorry of the change. and improved my grammar too