Once Upon A Time : A Defying Fate

We seem to be off to a very good start though you might want to take more time to develop some of the character relationships. You've got the concept down, just let it simmer a little more.

The story was well written, the vocabulary was beautiful and easy to understand, maybe it's just the paragraphs that seem long for a webnovel. Still, it's good enough for the most part. Just need to practice a lot and enjoy the moment of writing ideas that rarely others can do. Don't mind what people think while you enjoy the process of writing it. Because in the end it's all about finding happiness and you probably already know how to find it. Good job, Author.

This story has a good world building  with immersive Characters that keeps you wanting for more . I like the touch of Italian accent in it as well!.😚❤️