It seems alright, however the synnopsis was confusing, grammar mistakes, the characters don't feel at all real or unique and I don't really get the spark in reading where I expect something from it. A good attempt however and I wish you well in writing.
This is actually awesome if i could id love to trade places with the main character the story seems promissing and the premisse as well i just hope it keeps getting better
The MC behavior is like he was born in a royal family rather than a cultivation one. Cultivation family would give you more freedom if you are the strongest. Just look at the Ye family. The current strongest isn't the head of the family. He focus on his cultivation. A royal family would want the strongest be in command.
Yes there are mechanical/grammar errors. There are always errors in every story. Don't let them distract you from the genuinely entertaining tale.I hope you like details! Because DETAILS ABOUND. How many chapters are dedicated to the character creation menu? MORE THAN YOU'D THINK. But I still found it interesting, in a munchkin way. It's human nature to maximize.I want more, and am eagerly awaiting the next updates.
First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!
Eternal supreme of all cultivation with leveling system novel. In china alone 10 million readers everyday waiting for the updated chapters. Very unique. The author actually like to write myriad world system novels and I am not a fan of his other works.The translator here is a transcendent being in translation, every words used are well-selected and zero flaws. Fellow daoist and cultivators, we should donate for the hard work of our eternal translator.
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