Omnipotent Ascension

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: AkutoSai01
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. EditGod0949
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    Nice job the author did here, not a lot of chapters yet but the begining of the story starts with captivating action which makes one want to read more, love it[img=recommend]
  1. Valyrxa
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    Hello, there, author. As promised, I'll give you brutally honest review.

    As I've said in the other day, you need to fix how you write the dialogue but I see no improvement.

    I mean, why you do you use "<" and ">" to separate the dialogues and paragraphs instead of ("Blas bla, bla.).

    Your story is good, but ruined by your ignorance to learn the proper writing techniques.

    good luck.
  1. Jetboy76drh
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    Still in the early chapters but the power style and technique is very interesting. I’m looking forward to where this goes!
  1. Orange_CoffeeuZ
    Orange_CoffeeuZ rated it
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    It has a good potential! But author needs to arrange it well and there are some words that needs spacing.
  1. JustinGabventurezoL
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    Great read! Keep writing
  1. redlady
    redlady rated it
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    I thought this book was awesome
  1. Smiley9471
    Smiley9471 rated it
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    When is this going to be updated? The wait is a killer!
  1. LORDNOVEL18
    LORDNOVEL18 rated it
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    oh my god new book...... i am so excited

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