Omniarch's Awakening

you should read 5 chapters and tell me how many brain cells yall lost as well. Iost so many brain cells that i could barely register simple words. So many useless information were presented so many useless opinions were presented. So many useless things were presented.

Thank God it's not fortnite 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

The story is not consistent. In the first chapter it is mentioned that the MC and his sister are ordinary people without any talents. Though the MC's turned out to be true, the sister is talented in archery. Even the technology of the world is inconsistent. It is mentioned that there are cars and planes. But the MC travelled in carriage in 1 chapter. The names are also not to my liking. Go with western completely or chinese completely. I was not able to go past chapter 30 with that many plot inconsistencies.

I personally see no flaws in the story, characters, or world. The author has written a true neutral evil anti-hero and it’s beautiful. For a undead all the main character’s actions make sense for the way he should think. I look forward to his character development and wonder if he will find any shreds of humanity in him left over from his previous life as a human and how that will affect his goals in the world.

So far, is entertaining, too son to say more about the world building

The next group of people are the Koreans. How do I know? Well they walk and move in packs and they have a leader who holds their banner. Their leader is a Chinese Tourism representative who basically knows how to speak Korean. It has a ribbon and their flag is attached to the pole. You would easily see them beause they are always in large groups. What makes it more chaotic in their group tours are the children. Who knows where they have come from. Most of the younger kids are crying because they must be tired from the day's events. There is also those young mothers and aunties who bring their own luggages and fill it with, guess what,not foods from the hundreds of sellers of Macau's very own delicacies, but from the discounted stores who offer a 30 percent discount in children's milk. Their luggages are filled with powdered milk in large containers. I wonder why they buy here because you can buy it in bulk online.

(Matatanggap kaya ni xyrus ang kapatid nyang lobo?)

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