Very bad story.Pros :1. Kingdom building novel.2. Good translation.3. Based on Mount and Blade which i like.Cons:1. Way to much wordpadding for make chapters bigger. They repeat the same thing like 5 times in one chapter and 3 times in the next just in case reader forgets it.2. All the villagers in the territory are male and don't have a single name (atleast up to where I read). They seem to have emotions and talk, but for fks sake they might as well not. No names, no personality, only obeying orders.3. MC got the memory of a goldfish. He worries about problems when the solution was something he got as a reward from a side quest just one day ago. Or maybe it was because the author made the mc forgot so he could add filler text to the novel. Such as all the way the mc COULD HAVE solved the problem if he DIDN'T HAVE the system.4. There was one whole chapter which was just an essay about date palm trees.TLDR; Trash novel. Hope it won't get selected.
For what it is, this is a funny as well as well thought out story. The main character has development and evolves as he goes through the trials of surviving his escape from the dungeon and learning how to free himself from his contract as an undead. This was a great idea to take the dungeon and bring it out from the Undeads point of view.
wow!!!what a novel! Your plot is simply wonderful. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more.clap for your author.keep up the good work.I would keep reading.
First this story has already 100 plus chapters which is a great way for binge reading. The story plot is interesting. The narratives are easy to read and can be perceived well by the readers. The world background is written well.Overall, this book is a great read!Great work author!
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