I think that the prologue part is totally not needed right now. The way I see it, it can be very eye opening if the prologue part can be used further in the story.
otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.
So here's my review!
Strengths:
- Engaging post-apocalyptic world with OGI powers and hierarchy.
- Action-packed scenes that keep readers hooked.
- Superhuman abilities of the protagonist add excitement.
- Mysterious characters like Mr. Mink create intrigue.
- Flashback scene provides insight and hints at a larger story.
Areas for improvement:
- Abrupt transitions between scenes.
- Pacing issues in certain areas.
- Dialogue could be improved for better engagement.
Overall, the story has potential with its engaging world, thrilling action, and mysterious characters. However, addressing the issues of transitions, clarity, pacing, and dialogue would enhance the reading experience. With these improvements, the story could become even more captivating and leave readers eagerly anticipating future chapters.
This is the second time a review this book.What I like is that the ML is relatable and the overall action is keeping you on your toes .Great suspense !
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.
May this book's popularity rise in the future!
The conversation needs work if you want people to be more interested in the story's potential, thrilling action, and enigmatic character.
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.
May this book's popularity rise in the future!
A very good story with a engaging plot and a good pace. the situation of kage in academy I give you that excellent job but the descriptions can be improved other then that . it's a very good story
Interesting premise - wondering the direction that the story will go. I really enjoy reading the story. Great job author, just take care on some of your grammar mistakes.
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otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.
Strengths:
- Engaging post-apocalyptic world with OGI powers and hierarchy.
- Action-packed scenes that keep readers hooked.
- Superhuman abilities of the protagonist add excitement.
- Mysterious characters like Mr. Mink create intrigue.
- Flashback scene provides insight and hints at a larger story.
Areas for improvement:
- Abrupt transitions between scenes.
- Pacing issues in certain areas.
- Dialogue could be improved for better engagement.
Overall, the story has potential with its engaging world, thrilling action, and mysterious characters. However, addressing the issues of transitions, clarity, pacing, and dialogue would enhance the reading experience. With these improvements, the story could become even more captivating and leave readers eagerly anticipating future chapters.
May this book's popularity rise in the future!
The conversation needs work if you want people to be more interested in the story's potential, thrilling action, and enigmatic character.
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.
May this book's popularity rise in the future!