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Loved this story. It was a great read, most esp seeing as its not what I'm used to.The story line was good and the chapter length as well.The author did a great job, although there were some errors here and there. But what can I say, nobody is perfect.
The best thing I find here is the writing quality since it is so easy to understand and detailed. The details are hard to understand in some books but here that's not the case.I see a chapter every day so the updates look stable.The story looks well thought and the characters look fine too... (Just read the synopsis guys, if this isn't a unique plot, what is?)The world background, the time intervals between the events everything is also written well.Overall, I really think it's a good story with a unique plot and good writing. Keep up the good work :)
Writing Quality - 3/5 - It is a good read but it's painful to read each paragraph. For example, you always wrote in...Smiling wryly, (Name) bla bla blaNext paragraph: Looking at the interface, (Name,) bla bla blaNext paragraph: Sucking a cold bla bla, (Name) bla blaCritics: Next time, change the way you wrote for a better read, cause every paragraph is painful to read because as soon you made a paragraphs every time you made a comma ', ' the next word you wrote is always the mc name or side character name; After the comma making it cringe to read.Stability of update: 5/5 - Not much to say since the author put effort to update every day.Story Development: 4.5/5 - Minus 0.5 for the mc.Character Design: 4/5 - Minus 1 for the misinformation in the early chaps for the character design. I don't want to be racist so let's just wrap it up in mystery. World Background: 5/5- Very Good!*****Overall: It's a good read, definitely recommended for those wanted a humorous r18 novel. Some paragraph mistakes, typos, and misinformation. But it is still an enjoyable read. Definitely 5/5 for the author for creating such a brilliant work.
This novel has potential.It develops characters and has no sudden forced plot.Tha author has improved a lot from the beginning as I know because I was reading this book from the beginning .Keep Going
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