I just read until I hit the paywall, anyway the beginning chapters are clunky with the grammar, and some errors. The story was Alright nothing really notable, read a few chapters to get a feel then decide to continue or not. There are more stories that are in depth in my opinion and allot more smoother with the writing.
This is a solid novel. The author takes an authentic approach to the characters discovery and understanding of the world. If not a little naive. I do have some hiccups with it though. In the first ten chapters the author seems to searching for the characters personality. Each new chapter the MC has a new outlook on life. When he is handing over the money he is confident, arrogance and vengeful but also caring and generous. The next chapter in game the character is a coward who flinches when someone gets near him. It doesn’t make sense, just cause he is LVL 1 does that mean he will cower and not give a simple letter to a drunkard. It felt forced and out of place of the story.
Typical Japnese shy boy that have me questioning if he's actually gay. If you are into anime manga with high-school drama, cliché stuff about aggressive girl courting shy main boy then this is for you, I just grown out of this phase, it now becomes predictable and boring. No hate on the author, their writing quality is pretty good, just the genre that gutted my review.
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