Number One Dungeon Supplier

It starts good. But the more you read, the more you see the mc got pushed around by the mom. And too many chapter talking about side character that the author doesnt even create. This novel isnt worth reading even if it's not premium. The premise really good tho. And the starting chapter looks promising. But you better spend those ss somewhere else

I like the Way that the author made the  dungeon system for this world it’s fun has a lot of pandas in any cracks me up so funny.
Story so far is very well put together the progression is pretty good as well.

Amazing so far, hope it continues.

The story is really well thought out with no plot holes, has an great story that's easy to follow and keeps you enthralled in the story

While the plot, characters and world setting sound absolutely amazing, I find it just unbearable to read.
Grammar is passable, but there's 0 flow in the writing. It's like having amazing ideas but none of the skills to execute them.
Random conversations happen that have no relation to the current scene (or maybe just added as an afterthought by the author? that's supposed to give a little bit of insight to character quirks? unfortunately, it's done so badly...)
I have a HUGE problem with the pacing and flow of the story (at 6!!! chapters!!!) so while the story really, genuinely sounds interesting, I just can't pick it up. ( T T )

Disclaimer: I'm not that good at English myself, but I'm a very picky reader. It's just how I feel (shrug)

Well I drop the story about chap. 120

The story starts good with store bullding and has a fun undertone.

But the biggest negativ point is the system spirit his so cald Mother, after about 100 chap. Her character is so overbearing that you just can't take it anymore.

Than she tell him to kill, and forces the regrets off a other person on him to get him To wake up and take charges of his life.... As if there is no other method out there.... And he just takes it and is OK with it when she has clearly tried and manipulated him.

So after 100 chap. The fun and games end and your are trust into a murder fest.

I don't chare for the later chap. Anymore his mother's character is just to much for me together with his passiv Betamale attitude and the massiv shifts in the tone of the story in not even 5 chap. I'm dropping this **** like it has the plague.

I really like system novels, and this one really catches my interest. so far, it is climbing up my own rankings of books i keep an eye on for the latest chapter. keep up the good work and please keep the chapters coming.

Short: The Story is vast, which makes it pretty expensive to read, but most of the time it is a good read. The Character makes a 180° somewhere in the early 100s Chapter but otherwise is pretty consistent. Lengthy chapters in the 600s chapters to artificially legthen the story.

Writing Quality: The Author is often to forced in his writing, which makes Chapters not that good, but most of the times he gets it done right. After chapter 600 it started to get artificially extended explanations and descriptions. Which serve no real purpose (character or world building)

Stability of Updates: The Author tries to hard to match with the requests of his readers to release chapters fast, this in turn did dimish the quality of his writing as above stated. It might be a lack of Editing, but chapters feel about 30% longer than they should be After ca. The 600s chapter.

Story Development: The story developes on a steady pace, in my sight a bit to slow, espacially After chapter 600, with to many inbetween chapters that serve not much purpose. But this is not my choice, its the authors choice. This makes the story an expansive read tough.

World Background: The World is vast, the author even adds more to it by a method of the System the Maincharacter uses. Is the World fleshed out? not even close, there are still so many Questions about Jin's world and this with 630 chapters into the story.

Very interesting concept! I’m impressed! The chapters are a reasonable length and grammar/writing is fair. I really enjoy the idea of Supplying a battle zone. it reminds me of Gourmet Food Supplier of Another World, but with a more sci-fi feel to it.

Very nice!

A very well written story with great character and world development. Element of ecchi is a big plus and provides interesting business logic and cunningness. The premise is different from the usual cultivation genre and is quite refreshing.

Will definitely follow this work through given how well laid out it is so far.

To be honest, this novel is now one of my favorite on Qidian (alongside TKA). The style is similar to Trafford's trading club where the customers' stories are a big part of the novel. However, I enjoy Number one dungeon supplier a lot more because the MC actually progresses and the grammar/writing is overall better.

I can only find one major problem with this novel: it is currently standing on the 2nd rank of original novels, which is completely undeserved.....it should clearly be 1st place.

Read up to 800+ chapter.
Story started off very interesting. MC opening dungeon shop with real monster he captured from different world that he could visit. As time goes on he gain more subordinate and his shop became more famous. At least until chapter 500+.

After that the story seems to slow down massively. One of the story arc took around 100 chapter which solely focus on 1 battlefield being described by multiple character. It felt too padded.

One of my issue with this novel is the writing on the action portion. Author done a good job writing about the business part but the action part is lacking. There is a severe lack of tension during the fight especially in the later part of the novel. I don't know why author felt it was necessary to insert jokes during the fight, multiple times, in almost every fighting part of the novel. It is really out of place, ruin the tension and break the immersion during reading.

My last problem is with the characters, especially the MC. He really doesn't have much development even after so long. There is event where he seemed to experience character growth, and then he returned to how he is before. After some time the "growth event" occur again, and he still the same. This happen at least 3 times and changes are barely noticeable. The same can be said for his subordinate, they have no character development at all. The one with most development in character and story seemed to be his customer.

Overall the story started off good until around chapter 500. It did not turn bad, just dull and boring.

When will there be more chapters posted?