Normalizing the Labyrinth City in the Game

I, like many others, dropped it at chapter 30, here's why:First of all, chapter 30 was bad enough that the author decided to rewrite it. However, I wouldn't call it an improvement since it introduced some inconsistencies. You'll know what I mean when/if you get there and read the comments. Clearly, the author wanted that chapter to be completely different but gave in to the complaints. Now, the contents of that chapter do not bother me, since I have read, far far worse (trust me). What bothers me is the cliché justification of what happened. It's something you see a lot in stories that are geared towards a certain audience. It does not work in those stories and it certainly does not work in this one, which doesn't even aim for the same audience. The author shifts the responsibility from one party to another as a sort of plot twist, but this is misguided. Actions have consequences and things like infidelity have devastating consequences, more often than not. The same thing happens in a different novel and the cheated party commits suicide (just illustrating the aforementioned devastating consequences). Aside from that, I had many minor complaints such as the cliché back and forth typical of cultivation novels, the long info-dumps and the boring crafting chapters (at some point he spends around 6 chapters crafting weapons and potions), plus, the outright massive rewards the main character gets throughout the novel, but that was not enough for me to drop it. However, that's different when the main conflict of the story gets "resolved" in such an unsatisfying and misguided way.What I did like were some comedic bits such as the main character's narcissism, how he roasts the monsters, the way his relationship with his generals changed from one timeline to another and how they end up joining the monster roast sessions. That was pretty funny, but unfortunately, not enough to keep me going. The author says it gets better but I highly doubt that, considering my major gripe with how the conflict was resolved. Still, I wish the author good luck with this and the next projects and that he continues to improve his skills.

Nice interesting story.MC was a doctor before he died by being burned alive due many thought he was dead. So he was cremated (Alive)Thus he goes to hell (Half-aware that he became an abnormal ghost with great strength) And then mysteriously came back to the world of living.Before he disappeared he took a dead body over and gained a wife and was a son-in-law living with the wife's family.Anyway, he owns a bookstore that after a while decided to only open at night? (Not sure)Then somewhere in chapter 30 - 40 he encountered a hell-envoy. The hell envoy was probably tired of his job and thus entrusted (Albeit with a force) to the mc and the mc thus became an envoy of hell.Translation quality: 5 star, nothing wrong with it.-Stability of updates: 5 stars, can't say anything about it cuz trials.-Story development: 4 stars, because of trials but it;s getting better.-Character design: 5 stars, author did pay attention to the design and development even in the first 60 chapters (Although I read to ch 39)-World background: 4 stars, there is somewhat revealed, but for now it's not enough for me to give 5 stars. (Within 39 chapters)

it got stupid real fast. The first few chapters were manageable till it made me feel like the author is high on something really dangerous for health.

Just a correction: Ik it says its 5 chaps/week right now, but we r actually releasing 5 per day for the first week and at least 2 per day after that. The 5chap/week was just the default and QI forgot to change it. Also for the odd paragraphs, there's something wrong with the QI translator/editor platform that's just adding new paragraphs everywhere. I will try my best to fix it and in the mean time, plz bare with us

Our MC suddenly awakens in the middle of the action of someone trying to kill him.  Mc plot hole, he suddenly is able to save himself via a system. The pacing is decent, but simply is not my cup of tea.

IT'S FVCKING AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE! 💫 💫 💫 💫 ✨ ✨ ✨ ✨ THE PLOT IS GREAT AND THE CHARACTER IS SUPERRRRR COOL 😎 CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

I won't be able to write much because of the small number of chapters, but I will be waiting for the continuation. So far it's running fine and doesn't bother me while reading. Thank you for the author's hard work.

Here, I'll give you 5 stars as encouragement, although i don't know how long this will stay but i hope webnovel keeps this one at least, has a good plot for an echi story, keep up the good work, i hope for a chapter flush!