I'm lazy, but his novel is very good,. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This story starts a bit slow with the character already 'developed' in game. So unlike a lot of other similar stories you don't have to sit through the early levels. The only thing that sticks out to me is that at this point I can't really see where it is going. The MC has motivations but they are just kind of tiptoed around.
Just an examination of the writer's style.There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly. The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times.However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense. This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text.An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
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Wait… why am I thinking about him again? Ugh, I should really go out and date. I shouldn't stay in these four corners of my office for 12 hours and six times a week.
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