trash after chapter 170 his sect got destroyed and he made a new sect and it became all about the sect and him refining something and every one got awed everytime
The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story.I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters.As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent.I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library.All the best,Author!
Scratch my last review..Our great adventurer (ant)Ant-hony under the guidance of his Holy-beard Gandalf, for his Queen and 'less fortunate' brethren (and of course his own curiosity) alongside his trusty Kong, Tiny , delves deeper into the Abyssal depth of Respawnable monsters ( practically a dungeon) to retrieve the treasured cores and irreplaceable Biomass, for further growth and evolution.
I really liked it, it's just a shame that it's free only up to chapter 17. I don't feel like it's enough chapters to see if I really like something, it also feels greedy. I also didn't like that the time period was properly introduced in the beginning. Going by the picture I thought this was ancient times, till they brought up a QR code.
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