Petition to bring back "I Can See the Lines of Fortune"! A wonderful story to try, especially now that pocket hunting dimension is over. An all around interesting read! Please resume the translation of it! (Trying this as it worked for World of Deities)
There is a lot of potential for this story, but the quality of writing detracts so much from the overall novel it becomes almost unreadable. - Switching between past and present tense, grammar and punctuation errors abound.- The sentence structure itself in many paragraphs is broken or reversed.This has the working of a great novel, but it needs some love and care - an editor could make this novel so much better.Even if the author put it into word and grammarly it could make a huge difference.
at the beginning of the first 20 chapters the story was a bit boring, the story started to get interesting at the 30th chapter, I think this novel has a good future.
I sniffed, my eyes going red, and I can feel the tears coming up. but I can't let them see. I wouldn't be able to explain. It's takes all my will power to hold back the tears at least for now. It takes me a moment to put on a temporary emotionless facade.
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